| Deviant Login | Shop | Join deviantART for FREE  |
Take the Tour  |
The Journal Portal
Browse Journals |
Polls |
deviantART [dee·vee·un'nt·ART]
Keep in Touch!
|
Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
|
Sta.sh
Since you asked for advanced critique, and since you made a lot of interesting and well thought comments on my works (I really appreciated all of them!) I am going to be picky
1) Her mouth seems a bit crooked to me... like the right half (her right) is shorter than the left one.
2) I see you mixed some colours to paint her hair: that's very good, but one can still see the white space under the colours... Coloured pencils can be far more intense, but your wrist will hurt like hell in the end.
(same as above for her skin).
3)... there is no third point: the whole picture rocks!
i like how the eyes looks like a moon <3
ammaaazing xD